SCENE MAP
Characters: Blackdog; Moon Shadow; Windrider
Setting: Windrider's barn on a hill in Oakland, California, at night
How the scene begins: Moon Shadow walks into the barn and sees Black Dog
How the scene ends: Black Dog is afraid of Windrider and Moon Shadow and runs away.
The Problem: Black Dog needs money to run away.
SCAMPER
1) Substitute:
Q : What do you think would have happened if Windrider died when he met Black Dog in the barn?
A : I think the story will not be continued.
2) Modify:
Q : What would have happened if Moon Shadow was a teenager(about 16 to 17 year-old)?
A : When he and Black Dog were in the barn, he would not let Black Dog escape. Windrider's money would not be taken and he would immediately make Dragonwings and the story ended happily.
3) Rearrange:
Q : What if Robin met Black Dog at the barn before Moon Shadow?
A : Black Dog would catch Robin and told Moon Shadow and Windrider to give him those money.
REWITTEN SCENE
....The rains did not clear clear until that second week of September near the time when we had to pay out rent.The deliveries on the sixth day of the week, and after I finished my chores at the store, it was already getting dark. When I got home and opened the side door to the barn, I found Black Dog there, rummaging through our bedding.
He sat down on a stool when he saw me. "How do you do, Moon Shadow? Just a short time no see, you grew so fast! Now you nearly taller than me!"
"What are you doing here?"
"Can't one man visit another man? It's a lonely country. Maybe I missed the sight of your monkey's face. "He bent his elbow and scratched himself like a monkey for a moment.
"Do you want some tea or coffee before you go? Or cake?" I asked.
Black Dog smiled coldly. "You have all of my father's charm and tact, do you know that?"
"No no, I don't know. What do you want acually?"
He waved his hand at an old overstuffed chair. "Come. Sit and talk with a lonely, overweight man." His voice grew hard when I remained standing. "I said sit!"
"I want to stand, if you don't mind."
Black Dog shrugged. He leaned forward and clasped his hands together, resting his elbows on his knees. "We never did get to finish that talk we began a long time ago."
"About what?"
"About those two lovers to those memory I have consecrated myself."
"You mean the demon dung."
Black Dog laughed and regarded me in a cold shrewed way. "I want you to tell me about the thing you find yourself married to---your life, that is. I want you to tell me why you don't think your life is ugly. "He waved a hand around. "You live by yourself with your Father, whom you hardly see. You live in a place unfit even for animals. It is cold in the winter and an oven in the summer. Your clothes are patched. You are undernourished because all your money goes into this demon contraption that you are not even sure will work. And you don't think your life is ugly?
"You're jealous, don't you realize that?" You're jealous that we have something to belive in." I said with a peaceful voice.
Black Dog stopped scratching his leg and slipped his hand into his boot. He pulled out a knife. "I'd like you to find the beauty in my cutting off your nose and ears. "He got up slowly. He was smiling to himself. "Yes, I'd like you to try to tell people how beautiful you are with only a stub of a tongue."
I took out my gun in my pocket when he pulled out the knife.
"You better get off." I warned him coldly, and I waved the gun in my hand.
"Why...Why do you have a gun?" His face turned to white and his voice trembled with frightened.
"Why? My dad told me to avoid thives or robbers, and also the one who will steal our money."
"What? The one? Ha! What are you talking about?"
"Don't act like you don't know anything, man. I know you will not come to visit us at this time, and if you really come to visit us, why are you carrying knife, can you explain? Want to take our money? don't even think about it, you son of the bitch!" I was walking close to him while I was saying that.
Black Dog fell back when I turned the gun on his head, there was sweat on his forehead.
"Now, drop your knife and....." Suddenly, the side door opened and my father came in.
"Oh, you catch him?" Father didn't seemed to feel suprise.
"No, he came here by himself."
"Let him go."
"What?"
"I said let him go. Go away, Black Dog! I don't want to see you. If I know you has done any bad things on us, I will get you."
Black Dog stood up and staggering up to the door. When he had gone, I asked, "Why you let him go?"
"He's still our cousin, despite what Uncle did," Father said sternly.
(END)
Sunday, May 25, 2008
Saturday, April 26, 2008
A response of "Secondary school class sizes cut"
Small class teaching is not suitable for Hong Kong especially now. If Hong Kong really carry out small class teaching, Hong Kong Government must consider about the budget. Budget is the first problem they must think of. Small class teaching must need many money for the extra classes or facilities or teachers. And the other problem is there will be more ineffective teachers who don't recieive much experience to teach students. This will make the quality of the education downgrade.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
History Assignment
Does Hong Kong or Methodist College foster and promote those qualities that we consider paramount in order to be a good inventor?
I think Hong Kong just mainly fosters "detemine to the society's need". Every students in the school are taught to learn how to do things or make things that will be good to the society. If we don't follow, we will be useless in the society when we grow up.
I think Hong Kong just mainly fosters "detemine to the society's need". Every students in the school are taught to learn how to do things or make things that will be good to the society. If we don't follow, we will be useless in the society when we grow up.
Sunday, April 20, 2008
Computer Literacy
I practised typing in today's computer literacy lesson and I realized that we shouldn't put off our hands from the keyboard while typing.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
Two questions
Which revolution does Hong Kong need?
I don't think Hong Kong needs any revolution. I think everything is fine in Hong Kong now. And the revolutions are annoying, I don't want the revolutions disturb my daily life.
What are five basic qualities that a good inventor might have?
I think a good inventor should observe everything carefully, always ask questions, work hard, will suggest answers to the questions and loves science.
I don't think Hong Kong needs any revolution. I think everything is fine in Hong Kong now. And the revolutions are annoying, I don't want the revolutions disturb my daily life.
What are five basic qualities that a good inventor might have?
I think a good inventor should observe everything carefully, always ask questions, work hard, will suggest answers to the questions and loves science.
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
Number the Stars
Number the Stars is a fiction about the massacre of the Second World War that written by Lois Lowry. Its main character was a ten-year-old girl called Annemarie Johansen. She had a best friend called Ellen Rosen, but actually, she is Annemarie's elder sister, who died earlier in the war.
Easter History hw
1)How did the colonists unite America?
The colonists brought out the war of independence with Britain and then the colonists proclaimed The Declaration of Independence to unite the America.
2)How did the legislature take part in the structure of the federal government?
The legislature included Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives. Congress made laws and could impeach the President, the Senate stood for the States, and the House of Representatives stood for the people's interests in the States.
3)How did the American Revolution happen?
The colonists were discontent with Britain's economic policy and they thought the policy was not fair, they wanted to trade freely, So they started a revolution.
4)Why did the people in the Enlightenment object to absolute power?
The Enlightenment thinkers had more education and they thought of a lot of new ideas. They wanted to end all the unfair things and defended common people's rights in the Feudalism society, so the Enlightment thinkers objected to absolute power.
5)Explain one of the British acts that created economic discontent amongst the American colonists.
Britain got cheap raw materials and a big market for her goods from the 13 Colonies, but Britain didn't let the 13 colonies produce things that would contend with her goods. The colonists thought that was not fair. That was one of the British acts that created economic discontent amongst the American colonists.
The colonists brought out the war of independence with Britain and then the colonists proclaimed The Declaration of Independence to unite the America.
2)How did the legislature take part in the structure of the federal government?
The legislature included Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives. Congress made laws and could impeach the President, the Senate stood for the States, and the House of Representatives stood for the people's interests in the States.
3)How did the American Revolution happen?
The colonists were discontent with Britain's economic policy and they thought the policy was not fair, they wanted to trade freely, So they started a revolution.
4)Why did the people in the Enlightenment object to absolute power?
The Enlightenment thinkers had more education and they thought of a lot of new ideas. They wanted to end all the unfair things and defended common people's rights in the Feudalism society, so the Enlightment thinkers objected to absolute power.
5)Explain one of the British acts that created economic discontent amongst the American colonists.
Britain got cheap raw materials and a big market for her goods from the 13 Colonies, but Britain didn't let the 13 colonies produce things that would contend with her goods. The colonists thought that was not fair. That was one of the British acts that created economic discontent amongst the American colonists.
Tuesday, March 18, 2008
The differences and similarities in the political and economic contexts faced by the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony
I think the similarity in the political contexts of the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony is that they were both being colonized by different countries, and also, that countries which settled in different locations had created colonies with distinct social, religious, political and economic structures.
Another similarity is that they were both being colonized by Britain under an unwilling situation. And finally the United States turned to be independence by having a revolution but Hong Kong colony's sovereignty was given back to China by making a bargain.
Besides, the political structures of the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony was similar is they both under the rule of England's King George III and Queen Victoria but not under a book of law. And they didn't have the political structures like the president, the Judiciary, the Executive or the Legislative in the USA after their independence.
In the economic contexts, Hong Kong colony was being more successful than the 13 colonies. The Hong Kong colony starting the trading while the 13 colonies was still farming. That's one of its difference. Also, the transportation of the Hong Kong colony was being developed too. Such as railways, airplanes, ferries and the Victoria Harbour which didn't appear or being developed in the 13 colonies. That's the second difference in the economic contexts of the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony.
Another similarity is that they were both being colonized by Britain under an unwilling situation. And finally the United States turned to be independence by having a revolution but Hong Kong colony's sovereignty was given back to China by making a bargain.
Besides, the political structures of the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony was similar is they both under the rule of England's King George III and Queen Victoria but not under a book of law. And they didn't have the political structures like the president, the Judiciary, the Executive or the Legislative in the USA after their independence.
In the economic contexts, Hong Kong colony was being more successful than the 13 colonies. The Hong Kong colony starting the trading while the 13 colonies was still farming. That's one of its difference. Also, the transportation of the Hong Kong colony was being developed too. Such as railways, airplanes, ferries and the Victoria Harbour which didn't appear or being developed in the 13 colonies. That's the second difference in the economic contexts of the 13 colonies and the Hong Kong colony.
Sunday, March 2, 2008
The three questions
Our group's topic is Fake Dried Seafood. The three questions are:
1)Can the costumer define which seafood is fake, which is true?
2)Will you sell fake dried seafood?
3)What is the effect of eating fake dried seafood?
1)Can the costumer define which seafood is fake, which is true?
2)Will you sell fake dried seafood?
3)What is the effect of eating fake dried seafood?
Monday, February 25, 2008
My experience of the interview
I think the interview is easy and the people who are being interviewed are very nice. They all answered our questions patiently. And during the interview, I realized that there are many stores selling fake dried seafood, not even Yau Ma Tei but all around Hong Kong. I think this is a serious problem that it may affect people's life.
Tuesday, February 12, 2008
I am a writer in the Renaissance period
Hello, everyone. I am Penny Vuitton. I born in July 27, 1479 and died in January, 1522. I born in Italy. And when I was ten years old, I went to France to have study with my family. We stay in France for about ten years. At that time, I began to show my interest of painting. Although I learnt from many art teachers, my pictures were not very good so I gave it up.
We returned to Italy when I was twenty. I found a job of writing in Florence and I met my husband there. My husband was a great and famous painter and sculptor. He painted many good pictures and many grand statue. Many people said that he was a great leader in the Italian Renaissance. I was not a very famous, but a well-known writer in Italy. I wrote many books talked about life education. Many books talked about life are boring, but mine were not. So many housewife would buy my book.
In my daily life, I was very free. Except writing about three to four hours one day, I could do anything in other time. Cooking, cycling, reading, shopping.....I could find many fun.
I think the Renaissance period have changed the meaning of art, and many people was learnt about art all over again from this period and that was a good thing.
We returned to Italy when I was twenty. I found a job of writing in Florence and I met my husband there. My husband was a great and famous painter and sculptor. He painted many good pictures and many grand statue. Many people said that he was a great leader in the Italian Renaissance. I was not a very famous, but a well-known writer in Italy. I wrote many books talked about life education. Many books talked about life are boring, but mine were not. So many housewife would buy my book.
In my daily life, I was very free. Except writing about three to four hours one day, I could do anything in other time. Cooking, cycling, reading, shopping.....I could find many fun.
I think the Renaissance period have changed the meaning of art, and many people was learnt about art all over again from this period and that was a good thing.
Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Leonardo da Vinci and Michaelangelo
They both be the examples of Renaissance men because Leonardo da Vinci developed a new painting style. His two of the famous pictures include The Last Supper and the Mona Lisa. He was also the most famous Renaissance man. And Michaelangelo, he was not even a painter. He was a sculptor, an architect and a poet too. He was absolutely an artists. He drawn many good pictures and made many grand statues. Sistine Chapel Ceiling is one of his famous picture. These Renaissance men had great achievements for literature and art. They were normal people but they were special and they could have special goods. But in the Middle Age, only the king could have specials goods.
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